Monday, September 26, 2011


"I miss him." he said it quietly from the back seat, pulling my heart string with only a tiny slice of voice.

"Wanna call him?"

"I can't.  He is in Russia."


"But I can text him. Can you show me how to text?"

"Sure."  I pulled the contact up into the SMS menu and handed the phone to the boy.  He received it with a focus I wished I could see elsewhere, like in school. 

We sat down to dinner, silently chewing our salad.  School was good, we had already covered that.  Just before the staff came to take our plates, he piped up again.

"I even miss the dog...."


"She always snuggles up right next to me, even though she is so huge and takes up most of the bed."


"Yeah.  I miss the cats too. One fat one and the other one is really skinny."

"What do they do?"

"Well the fat one is really dumb just like our bunny.  She stalks me so whenever I come down the stairs she just follows right next to my feet.  As soon as I stop, she sits next to me. She used to be skinny but she got fat after she had kittens.  She stayed fat even after she stopped milking the kittens. "

I thought better about telling him the correct word was "nursing".   He was on a roll. 

"The other one is exactly the opposite.  He runs around and catches his own food, like birds and stuff."  I winced at this, thinking of the bird lovers who cringe at the sight of house cats left outside, but again I said nothing.  

"But he is still really skinny, too skinny, because you can see his ribs. I remember once I went with you to our vet, and they had a chart that showed what cats looked like if they were too skinny, and they said if the ribs are showing the cat is too skinny.  It should be like you can't see the rib but it's not like a huge chunk of fat..."  He ran his hands against the T-shirt outside of his own ribs as he said this, slightly rounding out his frame to illustrate the perfect feline shape. 

"Is he alright then?"

"I think so.  He eats a lot, we feed him twice a day and when we were gone the neighbors came to take care of him and the fat cat.  He also catches his own food.  But he stays really skinny."

He laughed gently as a thought came to him.

"Oh and before we went to camp, we washed him because he was really dirty.  He really didn't like it but he didn't scratch dad.  When we came back, he was just as dirty as before we washed him."

We both laughed at this, him at the memory of his smelly cat, me at the sight of his first big smile of the day.  Our soups came and went, we munch on brownies from the desert bar and he attacked a baked potato stuffed full of bacon bits. 

"Can you imagine how much I am eating?"  He said with an eye on the bacon potato, not waiting for an answer specifically.   Before I realized it, he was attacking a second one. 

"A bit much don't you think?"  I observed as I watched him dug out all the potato and stuff the skin full of bacon bits again.  

"Oh all right. "  He sprinkled a few bits of potato back on top the way chef Emeril Lagasse does his "bam!"

I let it go, forking my own pasta with enthusiasm. 

"What else do you miss?" 

"Well the skinny tom cat has a girl friend cat that comes over and plays with him sometimes. She's kinda pretty because she has black fur, white belly and white feet."  He raised half of a potato skin stuffed full of bacon to his mouth and took a bite.  "It is probably just a stray cat.  But both dad and I feel bad for the fat cat, because we think she is really lonely and that's why she stalks us.  She has no companion, so sometimes she sits really close to this giant dog and try to play with it."

He started on a plate of mac and cheese, before moving onto his own desert.  As we talked and ate, the afternoon sun had settled behind trees and curtains of night drew all around us.  Sparks of lights shone through the windows, illuminating figures, shops, and allowing us to peer into diners sitting at the tables in other restaurants.  They saw us too.  Sitting by the window, arms drawing imaginary illustrations as we talked, smiles creeping up corners of our mouths, despite a long day of drudgery, things left undone, and people gone missing that pulled on hearts.   Mouth full of sweets, weariness melted as we moved between shadows and sparks of light ourselves.

"I really do miss him so much..."  

Just as quietly as when we came in,  the boy said to no one in particular as we walked out, letting the night air carry a half spoken wish away into a land afar.  Perhaps there is no cure for missing someone, perhaps there is a dream waiting for him tonight, a dream sweeter than all the brownies and ice cream this place can offer up.


  1. That was so sweet. Excellent piece of writing.

  2. Beautiful! You're a natural with dialogue. I felt like I was right there.

    I ditto Barbara - excellent.

  3. You have a sweet, sweet boy. He has pulled on my heart strings, too.
    All of these feelings take place during an ordinary situation such as a meal.
    You've captured the dichotomy so well. Our hearts may be breaking, but we still laugh and eat and life goes on...

  4. Beautiful conversation. Simple and packed full of meaning.

  5. Interesting conversational piece.

    Great work.

  6. Brilliant piece of writing. I'm wondering if this is a fictional piece or is it real?

  7. That's very sweet. It sounds like he was very attached to the dog and cats. We, as people, are more like cats than we realize, I think.

  8. I love the dialogue here. I’m not sure there is any cure for missing someone.

  9. Awww, you wrote this so well! The character of the little boy was wonderfully drawn, I just wanted to give him a big hug.
    I don't think there is a cure for missing someone (except their presence, of course). Even time doesn't always help...

  10. That was a beautiful moment to share. Letting him speak his mind, his heart, without correction. Just a free flowing dialogue from child to adult. Much more rare than one might imagine.

  11. I think you go conversation very well.

  12. Thank you all for your kind comments. I believe this is my first "dialogue" piece - it is a bit tougher than monologue I'd say!

    Starlight - this is nonfiction.

    Dicky & Melee - I tend to agree with you.

    Nari - you are too kind and you are very observant, the sign of a good writer.

    Nessa - I thought so too. :)

  13. Ah, how beautiful. That last paragraph was my favorite. I know the ache of missing someone or more than one someone, and I hope he did have pleasant dreams, "sweeter than all the brownies and cake this place can offer up."

    What a good listener you were for him.

  14. I really appreciated the full message behind this simply put conversation. He sounds like a very sweet boy, with a tender heart.

  15. Such a delight to read this. The dialogue in particular was superb.




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